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Second Encounter by GingerQuin Second Encounter by GingerQuin
A scene from a Rp between me and :iconmarylittlerose: and our Ocs Sterling and Lenore.

Sterling (c) me

Lenore (c) :iconmarylittlerose:

Summary: Sterling was sitting on the wall of the bridge which connected the city to the country side. He was down to his last smoke when Lenore happened to be taking a stroll that night as well. During their first meeting they weren't exactly on friendly terms so this encounter was as strange as can be. After a very sarcastic filled conversation and angry tones the two finally calmmed down enough to straighten things out and start over.


this took me for ever

5hrs straight ya'll. So comments are kindly needed.



EDIT: i fixes the lighting on sterling jacket.
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To start off, The detail of this picture shows the thought that you have put into it. Especially in the light of the moon shining around Sterling's jacket and also in things such as Sterling's hair, the dangles from Lenore's jacket, the pinstripes of her skirt.
As for the clothes, we can see again that you know very well how to draw the human body and how to make the clothes "fit" that body. The only critique I have as far as that goes is that Sterling is dressed almost too plainly. We're used to seeing at least one thing that he wears be a bit edgy or bold. Seeing him in all plain black clothes might have been intentional but I think at least one thing he wears should have a pattern, even if it's subtle.
The shading on the characters is good except I wonder if it would be harsher at night with the only light coming from the moon or streetlights. The shading on Lenore's face especially makes me wonder if she is standing almost directly in front of a streetlight since the hair on the right (the viewer's right) doesn't cast that much of a shadow. But, looking down at the ground I wonder if the streetlight is behind the viewer. Then I would have to question why Sterling's face is illuminated almost by his lighter alone.
The last thing I have to critique is that in the background there are some random black and white strokes which don't look like anything.

All that aside. I think this is a well-done picture. I do think you had a definite goal of what you wanted to communicate unfortunately the subject matter is not as exciting as it could be. It's very everyday, which isn't bad, but it could be a more compelling moment perhaps.
While the concept and posing may not be completely original I feel like the personalities of the subjects are still there which makes this "couple" a unique couple.
I love your technique as always and I think you have a very strong sense of what your style of drawing is.
The impact of this picture is probably pretty strong for your watchers who know Sterling's background and history. I'm not familiar with Lenore but I would be interested in checking her out now that I've seen her here.

Anyway, that's all. I love your artwork and I look forward to more in the future.
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:iconmyricae91:
Myricae91 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ok.
First: You're a great illustrator and artist. I like the concept and how light and shadows turn on!
Second: Seriously, those two look very cute togheter, think about it ;)
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:icongingerquin:
GingerQuin Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
First: AMG thankies >u<

seccond: ikr ;3 but im not pushing anything.
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:iconmarylittlerose:
MaryLittleRose Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Omg I really didn't expect a background so pretty like this one<333

I really love how this looks, you did great bby! you really got Lenore's figure and Sterling looks as I imagined haha~ thank you very much for thisss<333
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:icongingerquin:
GingerQuin Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
lol your very welcomez im happy u love it i swear your Ocs are to fun to draw XD.
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:iconask-kevlron:
ask-kevlron Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"The two finally clammed down"?  Other than that, you did a good job.  I'd give you a cookie, but I can't reach that far.))
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:iconduchessfluffybutts:
DuchessFluffybutts Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this looke so perfect the lighting the background the emotions moon lighting all of it is beyond perfect!! it looks so amazing 
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:icongingerquin:
GingerQuin Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
thank you s much sorry for the late reply
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:iconduchessfluffybutts:
DuchessFluffybutts Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey its fine School is in full swing right now. AND IT HURTS!
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:iconaskthegirls:
AsktheGirls Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
O...M...G!!! THIS LOOKS AMAZING!! I LOVE the lighting, the background, the colors, EVERYTHING!!! 
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:icongingerquin:
GingerQuin Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
QuQ thankies bby <3
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:iconaskthegirls:
AsktheGirls Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
It's beautiful love~ I love it
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:iconlopsidelibby:
lopsidelibby Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
this is nice. the background is quite lovely.
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:icongingerquin:
GingerQuin Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
thanks <3
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:iconblackblade94:
blackblade94 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aaaw~ I love the night time sky behind them :)
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:icongingerquin:
GingerQuin Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
yush it took for ever tho TTuTT
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:iconblackblade94:
blackblade94 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It shows :3
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:icontheiris3:
TheIRIS3 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
The background is amazing! The characters like always look very good. I enjoy Lenore's facial expression here. Great job, like usual.
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:icongingerquin:
GingerQuin Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
thankies i like it to. took me a few tries tho
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:icontheiris3:
TheIRIS3 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
Well it turned out amazing! 
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:iconrgsnowbellz:
RGSnowBellz Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
I love the background in this, especially how you did the moon and clouds... on another note well done on the shading of the characters you did a good job there to UwU))
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:icongingerquin:
GingerQuin Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
thankies ! >u<  <333
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:iconrgsnowbellz:
RGSnowBellz Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
Your welcome
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:iconlinkonpark:
Linkonpark Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Student Artist
I actually like this style. Really good!
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:icongingerquin:
GingerQuin Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
same here i was exploring sai and i figured it out
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:iconlinkonpark:
Linkonpark Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Student Artist
I hope you make good use to it.
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:iconask-princess-olivia:
Ask-Princess-Olivia Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
(( oh geez, I just love how you drew Lenore. <33 I bet this was a very interesting RP, considering both of their personalities. The lighting is nearly perfect, ugh it just looks really great. Well done. :clap:
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:icongingerquin:
GingerQuin Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
>u< i had so much fun with the lighting im happy i didnt uses to much refs.
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:iconask-princess-olivia:
Ask-Princess-Olivia Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
(( I know the feeling lol. Where you finish a drawing without refs and you're like...this actually looks good?! QwQ
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:iconask-kappaprincess:
ask-kappaprincess Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
Oh my Lord! Its beautiful! I love the details and the colors, the shading, perfect anatomy. Oh Lord! ♥g♥
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:icongingerquin:
GingerQuin Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
QuQ oh gosh thankies
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:iconask-kappaprincess:
ask-kappaprincess Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
Wecomes
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:iconautomaticarsonist:
automaticArsonist Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing! better than anything I could do aha
But this picture is just WOW
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:icongingerquin:
GingerQuin Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
Thank you so much for your comment ^v^
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:iconautomaticarsonist:
automaticArsonist Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem~
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